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He crumbles,
she passes the broom
We won't always be there. Hard to say.


Things come in bursts for me lately. I'm in the process of writing a longer piece ( a song), so bear with me please lol
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someonesecho Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
oh gosh, wow
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Bamboo-Warrior Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yep. It's a little harsh.
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Nightcool Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Woman: Oh dear, another person has died. *gets broom and cleans up the mess*

For such a short writing, I like it. :3
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Bamboo-Warrior Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well that's one way to put it lol. Glad you like it! Thanks!
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Nightcool Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Hehe. ^^
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Aeoh Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
maybe its just me, but i reeeally like short poem-like thingies lol. Kinda like 
For sale: baby shoes, never worn

off of Ernest hemmingway 
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Bamboo-Warrior Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, you're not alone. Simple, but it says a lot and leaves much open for interpretation.
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